Tuesday, 8 September 2015


WALT: write an introduction that orientates and hooks in the reader.

Do you know how to make butter?  Well today Miss Lavakula’s literacy class got to learn how to make butter with Mrs Garden.If you want to make butter then you have to get these things which is cream and salt.Once you have finished putting all of the ingredients into a bottle you have to shake it until it's set.

1 comment:

  1. I can tell you are trying hard to hook your reader in. Don't tell them too much of what happens in the introduction, you don't want to spoil the story!